on holiday

Posted on December 12, 2012 by Deleted User

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1 Response to on holiday

  1. dwicksey.206 says:
    December 19, 2012 at 8:00 pm

    Well done Suejla. What a lovely story! It’s nice to see that your use of full stops has improved since Year 2. Do you think you could go back over your story and spot where there are some speech marks missing?
    I really enjoyed reading your writing.
    Mrs. Wicksey

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